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11-20-2003, 11:22 PM
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Mod ~ Eastern Thought
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Poetry, anyone?
A NIGHT OF SOLITUDE
In the still night by the vacant window,
wrapped in monk's robe I sit in meditation,
navel and nostrils lined up straight,
ears paired to the slope of shoulders.
Window whitens-- the moon comes up;
rain's stopped, but drops go on dripping.
Wonderful--the mood of this moment--
distant, vast, known to me only! ~Ryokan
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11-22-2003, 03:09 AM
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Interesting. I'll reciprocate.
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Keys Oh, Master of the Keys What is in your hand? Looks like a skeleton key Yet, a deadbolt Have you locked the door to the past? Or opened one to the future? Oh, Master of the Keys What is in your hand? Is that the key To me?
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I composed this quite a few years ago while I was waiting for some work to do at an assembly job I had (kept it for only 6 months because I was paid piecework and I sat around many hours doing abso-freaking-lutely nothing.) It's a first or second draft and took me less than a half hour to compose (I was that bored.) I have another poem if anybody's interested (but, I must admit, I'm lousy at composing poetry.) Phyllis Sidhe_Uaine
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11-25-2003, 01:29 PM
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Is the subject here personal poetry, or general appreciation of poetry?
Not much of my own, but I do have a great appreciation for some of the classic British poets - Keats, Milton, Coleridge, Byron (at least in part if not in whole).
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11-25-2003, 03:13 PM
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Mod ~ Eastern Thought
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Namaste brian,
as it's the lounge area.... any poetry that you feel is moving for you, i would be happy to see... the same goes for anyone really... either your own or someone elses
i think that people's selection of poetry provides a certain insight into their character that i find hard to determine in other fashions
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11-30-2003, 11:20 AM
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Assalamoalkikum,
I read this poem on the internet,and thought it was beatiful. so here it is:
Rosebud
It is only a tiny rosebud,
A flower of Allah's (God's) design;
But I cannot unfold the petals
With these clumsy hands of mine.
The secret of unfolding flowers
Is not known to such as I.
ALLAH opens this flower so sweetly,
Then in my hands they die.
If I cannot unfold a rosebud,
This flower of Allah's design,
Then how can I have the wisdom
To unfold this life of mine?
So I'll trust in Allah for leading
Each moment of my day.
I will look to Allah for His guidance
Each step of the way.
The pathway that lies before me,
Only Allah knows.
I'll trust Him to unfold the moments,
Just as He unfolds the rose.
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12-01-2003, 12:25 AM
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Another I wrote a while ago (second draft.)
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A Perfect List For A Perfect Day (Or Longer) No Murder No Rape No Violence No Pain No Suffering No Discrimination No Anger No Fear No Sadness No Usury No Taking Without Giving No Retribution No Mothers Crying No Gunshots In the Night No Wondering Is This World All For Naught No War No Starvation No Children's Tears No Trenches No Fires Set For No Reason No Isolation No Numbness To the Pain Of Others No Blaming Others For Our Own Foibles No Hate No Mistrust No Distrust No Wishing Someone Else Dead No Coveting Someone Else's Property No Stealing No Forcing Others To Your Beliefs No trashing Another For Something They Can't Help Is Anyone Interested?
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Constructive comments greatfully accepted by author/composer. Phyllis Sidhe_Uaine
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12-01-2003, 10:33 AM
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Assalamoalikum, Phyllis
Nice poem, i esp liked the last line 'Is Anyone Interested?'
I wrote a poem, just wrote what was coming in my mind. anyway here it is:
The unsaid
Try to hear the unsaid,
In the silence of the stars.
Stop the tears from falling,
Tell the heart not to bleed.
Try to see the light,
Not the darkness that surrounds you.
Open your eyes, see the beauty,
Doesn't it make you wonder?
yet the mind is chained with shackles
Freedom is what it needs,
Faith is what it desire.
Then why are the chains so strong?
Why does it lack the power?
The effort to break the fetter of lies,
the strenght to enter the realm of bliss.
Are you blind to the obvious?
Or deaf to the calling of truth?
Why stop the peace to enter?
Yet,let the fire of hate in?
Comeback, please do
Forgiveness is right where you fell.
So how was it?
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12-02-2003, 04:21 PM
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a few from Cold Mountain
Among a thousand clouds and ten thousand streams,
Here lives an idle man,
In the daytime wandering over green mountains
At night coming home to sleep by the cliff.
Swiftly the springs and autumns pass,
But my mind is at peace, free from dust or delusion
How pleasant to know I need nothing to lean on
To be still as the waters of the autumn river!
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12-02-2003, 04:22 PM
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Mod ~ Eastern Thought
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Cold Mountain
If you are looking for a place to rest,
Cold Mountain is a good place to stay.
The breeze flowing through the dark pines
Sounds better the closer you come.
And under the trees a white-haired man
Mumbles over his Taoist texts.
Ten years now he hasn't gone home;
He has even forgotten the road he came by.
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12-02-2003, 04:24 PM
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Mod ~ Eastern Thought
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Cold Mountain
Cold Mountain is a house
Without beams or walls.
The six doors left and right are open
The hall is blue sky.
The rooms all vacant and vague
The east wall beats on the west wall
At the center nothing.
Borrowers don't bother me
In the cold I build a little fire
When I'm hungry I boil up some greens.
I've got no use for the kulak
With his big barn and pasture --
He just sets up a prison for himself.
Once in he can't get out.
Think it over --
You know it might happen to you.
(a kulak is a minor landed noble)
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12-02-2003, 04:25 PM
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last one from Cold Mountain
People ask about Cold Mountain Way;
There's no Cold Mountain Road that goes straight through:
By summer, lingering cold is not dispersed,
By fog, the risen sun is screened from view;
So how did one like me get onto it?
In our hearts, I'm not the same as you --
If in your heart you should become like me,
Then you can reach the center of it too.
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12-02-2003, 09:52 PM
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In this moment
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A fairly recent haiku I wrote, around the beginning of November, 2003.
Morning's reflection
Droplets alight; rest.
The sun burns off the day’s frost;
Delicate balance.
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12-03-2003, 08:44 PM
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Ryokan
to his Teacher:
An old grave hidden away at the foot of a deserted hill,
Overrun with rank weeks growing unchecked year after year;
There is no one left to tend the tomb,
And only an occasional woodcutter passes by.
Once I was his pupil, a youth with shaggy hair,
Learning deeply from him by the Narrow River.
One morning I set off on my solitary journey
And the years passed between us in silence.
Now I have returned to find him at rest here;
How can I honor his departed spirit?
I pour a dipper of pure water over his tombstone
And offer a silent prayer.
The sun suddenly disappears behind the hill
And I’m enveloped by the roar of the wind in the pines.
I try to pull myself away but cannot;
A flood of tears soaks my sleeves.
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12-04-2003, 08:44 PM
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Mod ~ Eastern Thought
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a poem of my own
Reflections from a Moon Mat
I sit in meditation posture in a china-berry room
your gentle breathing counts the mantras
ticking off the mala beads
A black and white cat mewls for attention
the click of claws upon the wooden floor
a cold nose pressed to my face
The moon shines bright through the window
as clouds drift across the sky
carrying my prayers to all beings
The stillness becomes quiet and my breath
seems to echo with emptiness
connoting something beyond conception
My knees ache and my ankles are sore
the cold is seeping into the room
a small blanket keeps me warm
Rising from my mat with creaking joints
i join you in a mound of covers and pillows
to sleep; warmed, content.
You stir in response to my presence
bringing coldness into your warmth
rolling over, leg draped over mine
I touch your face gently
fingers tracing the crease of your skin
soft sighs escape into the night
I smile a little smile
slide across the sheets to be closer to you
and drift off into forever
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12-05-2003, 01:34 PM
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salam,
(read it on the net)
The Last Rainbow Warrior Is Dead
Bitter funerals in silence held
Twelve coffins laid to earth
To dust all human hope to wither
The last rainbow warriors is dead
Ours is the world of tragedy
Ours is the world of grief
For countless,
gray days of dismay
It's been snowing black ashes
upon these devastated lands
Dreadful are the storms
that grind these mountains to sand
Hear the voice of destruction
as it screams through our souls
With the vast storms it walks
Proud destruction in human form
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