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08-20-2006, 11:32 PM
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in essence
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Oxfordshire uk
Posts: 870
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Where are you Lulu?
Diamond Lucy love thing
Smiles sunbeams through cloud
Caimanson, hope you don't mind, Haiku now able to flow.............
- c -
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08-21-2006, 12:55 AM
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#227 (permalink)
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Oannes
Join Date: May 2006
Location: SW United States
Posts: 2,613
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Smiles sunbeams through cloud
smacks into solar panels
makes computers go
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08-21-2006, 06:53 PM
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#228 (permalink)
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Mind or spirit?
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 222
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
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Originally Posted by flowperson
Sorry but this violates the 575 rule taught to me so well by wil when I came on the board. 1st line the last line of the previous post, 5 syllables. Second line, 7 syllables allowed. 3rd line only 5 syllables allowed again
Try again. It's easy once you get the hang of it.
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FORGIVENESS!  (I knew I couldn't have been that easy....)
CIEL, you are more than welcome.
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08-21-2006, 07:00 PM
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#229 (permalink)
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Mind or spirit?
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 222
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
makes computers go
Do they really Flow?
Oh, those flat things there
This is my redemption 
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08-21-2006, 07:25 PM
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#230 (permalink)
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Oannes
Join Date: May 2006
Location: SW United States
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Ummm... the second line needs seven syllables. I suggest...
Makes computers go
Do they really "always" Flow
Oh those flat things there
Again, also thanks to wil for the assistance. He helped me at the start.
flow.... 
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08-21-2006, 08:57 PM
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#231 (permalink)
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in essence
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Oxfordshire uk
Posts: 870
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Oh those flat things there
Gotta move the dimension
Celestial sphere
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08-21-2006, 09:48 PM
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#232 (permalink)
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at peace
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Texas
Posts: 3,267
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Celestial sphere
More than only syllables
Blessings all around
(I had trouble, too, Caimanson )
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08-21-2006, 10:01 PM
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#233 (permalink)
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Oannes
Join Date: May 2006
Location: SW United States
Posts: 2,613
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Blessings all around
Tiny Tim and old Scrooge too
Cut the bird to feast
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08-21-2006, 10:48 PM
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#234 (permalink)
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Mind or spirit?
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Solihull, UK
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Cut the bird to feast
Flow, please roast it really slow
Leave it for an hour
Fear and trembling....
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08-21-2006, 11:00 PM
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#235 (permalink)
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at peace
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Texas
Posts: 3,267
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
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08-21-2006, 11:44 PM
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#236 (permalink)
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Oannes
Join Date: May 2006
Location: SW United States
Posts: 2,613
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Applause for the chef !
Gastronomical delight
Not fear and trembling
(good work Caimanson !!!! )
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08-22-2006, 12:19 AM
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#237 (permalink)
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Executive Member
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Taiwan
Posts: 720
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Not fear and trembling.
Oh, yes, yes it is, sorry.
Caught me unawares.
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08-22-2006, 12:23 AM
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#238 (permalink)
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in essence
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Oxfordshire uk
Posts: 870
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Not fear and trembling
But syllable syllabub
Taste smoothie supreme
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08-22-2006, 12:32 AM
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#239 (permalink)
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in essence
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Oxfordshire uk
Posts: 870
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Mmmm .....double post..... cant edit, so............
Caught me unawares
In syllable syllabub
soak smoothie supeme
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08-22-2006, 12:36 AM
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#240 (permalink)
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Executive Member
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Taiwan
Posts: 720
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
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Originally Posted by Ciel
Mmmm .....double post..... cant edit, so............
Caught me unawares
In syllable syllabub
soak smoothie supeme
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The alliteration, oh the alliteration.
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