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08-28-2006, 04:38 PM
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Not sure about that last line Caimanson but hey, I like it
Never mind I'll watch TV she says, leaving her lover in wretched self-doubt. For the haiku purist, that must surely live inside all of us, how about I'll watch the TV she says, leaving her lover in wretched self-doubt. |
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08-28-2006, 04:58 PM
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Why do cows say MU?
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Quote:
 in wretched self-doubt muddy waters flow downhill renewing floodplains |
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08-29-2006, 01:03 PM
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at peace
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
look with better eyes
lift what we held to the light and love each other (OOPS! edited to add  )<OR> look with better eyes look with the eyes that don't see amazing vision (amazing vision...haiku can flow again...) |
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08-29-2006, 08:34 PM
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at peace
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
(Hi wil! The idea is a great one
...umm...but ya gotta take the last line of the person before you and go with it. Just trying to avoid a haikuist revolt)InPeace, InLove |
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