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08-28-2006, 03:45 AM
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#271 (permalink)
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Oannes
Join Date: May 2006
Location: SW United States
Posts: 2,613
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
the light in the darkness
whiteness hidden in the black
Yin-Yang curving time
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08-28-2006, 04:21 PM
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#272 (permalink)
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Why do cows say MU?
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Pacific Ring of Fire
Posts: 3,716
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Yin-Yang curving time
transforming with a purpose
hidden to the blind
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08-28-2006, 04:24 PM
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#273 (permalink)
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Mind or spirit?
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 222
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Yin-Yang curving time
Gosh, forgot my physics book
Never mind I'll watch TV
EDIT: Sorry Seattlegal, the last shall be the first
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08-28-2006, 04:38 PM
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#274 (permalink)
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Executive Member
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Taiwan
Posts: 720
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Not sure about that last line Caimanson but hey, I like it
Never mind I'll watch TV
she says, leaving her lover
in wretched self-doubt.
For the haiku purist, that must surely live inside all of us, how about
I'll watch the TV
she says, leaving her lover
in wretched self-doubt.
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08-28-2006, 04:43 PM
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#275 (permalink)
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Mind or spirit?
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 222
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Can't believe I made a mistake again, seattlegal you had the last laugh, hey
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08-28-2006, 04:58 PM
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#276 (permalink)
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Why do cows say MU?
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Pacific Ring of Fire
Posts: 3,716
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Quote:
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Originally Posted by Caimanson
Can't believe I made a mistake again, seattlegal you had the last laugh, hey 
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LOL! Don't sweat it!
in wretched self-doubt
muddy waters flow downhill
renewing floodplains
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08-28-2006, 05:56 PM
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#277 (permalink)
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Mind or spirit?
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Solihull, UK
Posts: 222
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Renewing floodplains
Give life back to the flora,
to those doughnut weeds (5 OK?)
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08-28-2006, 10:20 PM
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#278 (permalink)
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Watcher
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Earth
Posts: 584
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
What can be will be
constantly traveling fast
The truth that we see
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08-29-2006, 03:17 AM
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#279 (permalink)
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Where is my mind?
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Middlesbrough, UK
Posts: 602
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
The truth that we see
Is the truth we always held
Look with better eyes
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08-29-2006, 01:00 PM
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#280 (permalink)
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UNeyeR1
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Maryland
Posts: 8,001
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Look with better eyes
Look with the eyes that don't see
amazing vision
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08-29-2006, 01:03 PM
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#281 (permalink)
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at peace
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Texas
Posts: 3,267
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
look with better eyes
lift what we held to the light
and love each other
(OOPS! edited to add  )
<OR>
look with better eyes
look with the eyes that don't see
amazing vision
(amazing vision...haiku can flow again...)
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08-29-2006, 02:14 PM
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#282 (permalink)
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Watcher
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Earth
Posts: 584
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Amazing vision
Not so amazing for some
The truth can blind you
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08-29-2006, 06:40 PM
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#283 (permalink)
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at peace
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Texas
Posts: 3,267
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
The truth can blind you
In order to help you see
What you have not seen
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08-29-2006, 08:15 PM
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#284 (permalink)
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UNeyeR1
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Maryland
Posts: 8,001
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
The truth can blind you
but just open the essence
and love each other
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08-29-2006, 08:34 PM
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#285 (permalink)
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at peace
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Texas
Posts: 3,267
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
(Hi wil! The idea is a great one  ...umm...but ya gotta take the last line of the person before you and go with it. Just trying to avoid a haikuist revolt  )
InPeace,
InLove
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