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10-11-2006, 01:00 PM
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at peace
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
And cruise inside lanes
Like Hogan under radar
Seeing yet unseen
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10-11-2006, 10:05 PM
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#377 (permalink)
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Oannes
Join Date: May 2006
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Seeing yet unseen
Deep in thought, deep in thinking
Bird on his shoulders
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10-23-2006, 05:12 AM
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#378 (permalink)
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Give Us This Day...
Join Date: Apr 2006
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Bird on his shoulders
Flattened and discarded
yesterdays forgotten
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10-23-2006, 09:09 PM
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#379 (permalink)
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Oannes
Join Date: May 2006
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
yesterdays forgot (shortened to the required five syllables)
bring the truths of tomorrow
life in the moment
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10-23-2006, 10:06 PM
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#380 (permalink)
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Give Us This Day...
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
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Originally Posted by flowperson
yesterdays forgot (shortened to the required five syllables)
bring the truths of tomorrow
life in the moment
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(I thought the only rule was 17 total)
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10-23-2006, 10:30 PM
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#381 (permalink)
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Oannes
Join Date: May 2006
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Nope. I was taught (by wil) that the first line has five, the second seven, and the third line five for a total of seventeen. Of course wil may have been feeding bogus info to a novice, but I don't think so from what he has written elsewhere here. Not much of what he writes is bogus, IMHO.
flow....
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10-23-2006, 11:00 PM
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#382 (permalink)
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Give Us This Day...
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
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Originally Posted by flowperson
Nope. I was taught (by wil) that the first line has five, the second seven, and the third line five for a total of seventeen. Of course wil may have been feeding bogus info to a novice, but I don't think so from what he has written elsewhere here. Not much of what he writes is bogus, IMHO.
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Apparently he's correct! (I've learned something) The 17 total thing I mentioned is a common european corruption.
Thanks!
Now back to the program...
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10-24-2006, 07:06 PM
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#383 (permalink)
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at peace
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Location: Texas
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Life in the moment
So many lessons to learn
But for now, just be
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10-24-2006, 07:24 PM
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#384 (permalink)
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UNeyeR1
Join Date: Oct 2005
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
But for now, just be
in love is so apropo
spirit bountiful
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10-24-2006, 07:45 PM
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#385 (permalink)
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in essence
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Spirit bountiful
In you I breath existence
In you, energy
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10-28-2006, 03:00 AM
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#386 (permalink)
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Give Us This Day...
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
In you, energy
takes me in its arms and flys
into breathless skies
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10-29-2006, 12:35 AM
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#387 (permalink)
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Oannes
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
into breathless skies
my spirit ascends on high
as it was meant to
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11-18-2006, 06:20 PM
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#388 (permalink)
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Give Us This Day...
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
As it was meant to
Some old dirt of mine decays
By the forest path
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11-18-2006, 10:23 PM
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#389 (permalink)
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Oannes
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
By the forest path
Old dirt nourishes flowers
That bloom in the mist
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11-26-2006, 07:33 PM
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#390 (permalink)
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at peace
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Texas
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
That bloom in the mist
Bursting forth in scented hue then
Bowing low with seed
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