The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain

[InLove]

And cruise inside lanes

Like Hogan under radar

Seeing yet unseen

[flowperson]

Seeing yet unseen
Deep in thought, deep in thinking
Bird on his shoulders

[Prober]

Bird on his shoulders
Flattened and discarded
yesterdays forgotten

[flowperson]

yesterdays forgot (shortened to the required five syllables)
bring the truths of tomorrow
life in the moment

[Prober]

Originally Posted by flowperson

yesterdays forgot (shortened to the required five syllables)
bring the truths of tomorrow
life in the moment

(I thought the only rule was 17 total)

[flowperson]

Nope. I was taught (by wil) that the first line has five, the second seven, and the third line five for a total of seventeen. Of course wil may have been feeding bogus info to a novice, but I don't think so from what he has written elsewhere here. Not much of what he writes is bogus, IMHO.

flow....

[Prober]

Originally Posted by flowperson

Nope. I was taught (by wil) that the first line has five, the second seven, and the third line five for a total of seventeen. Of course wil may have been feeding bogus info to a novice, but I don't think so from what he has written elsewhere here. Not much of what he writes is bogus, IMHO.

flow....

Apparently he's correct! (I've learned something) The 17 total thing I mentioned is a common european corruption.

Thanks!

Now back to the program...

[InLove]

Life in the moment

So many lessons to learn

But for now, just be

[wil]

But for now, just be
in love is so apropo
spirit bountiful

[Ciel]

Spirit bountiful
In you I breath existence
In you, energy

[Prober]

In you, energy
takes me in its arms and flys
into breathless skies

[flowperson]

into breathless skies
my spirit ascends on high
as it was meant to

[Prober]

As it was meant to
Some old dirt of mine decays
By the forest path

[flowperson]

By the forest path
Old dirt nourishes flowers
That bloom in the mist

[InLove]

That bloom in the mist

Bursting forth in scented hue then

Bowing low with seed