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10-30-2005, 12:08 PM
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General Member
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Oklahoma
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The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Pseudo Haiku = the only structure rule is they must be 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables per line...topic can be anything of your choice.
The Chain= you must begin your pseudo-haiku using the last line of the poem before as the first line in your's.
I have seen these haiku chains get to 1000+ posts in other groups.
I begin with:
a haiku a day (5 syllables)
will keep the doctor away (7 syllables)
verbal supplement (5 syllables)
you begin with:
verbal supplement
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10-30-2005, 01:00 PM
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in essence
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Oxfordshire uk
Posts: 870
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Verbal supplement
Silence of the vitamin
Creative balance
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10-30-2005, 07:06 PM
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Elder Member
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 599
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
creative balance
is the source of peace
is it yin or yang?
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10-30-2005, 07:47 PM
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Peace, Love and Unity
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Scotland
Posts: 5,413
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Is it Yin or Yang?
So the confusion of one
Gives all clarity
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10-30-2005, 08:14 PM
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in essence
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Oxfordshire uk
Posts: 870
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Gives all clarity
The sound of one hand clapping
The other listens
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10-30-2005, 08:29 PM
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General Member
Join Date: Sep 2005
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
The other listens
To the sounds of the forest
The world wide awake
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10-30-2005, 09:48 PM
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General Member
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Oklahoma
Posts: 239
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
the world wide awake
me still in my pajamas
going nowhere fast
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10-31-2005, 03:24 PM
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Where is my mind?
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Middlesbrough, UK
Posts: 602
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
going nowhere fast
my laziness knows no bounds
life rushes on by
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10-31-2005, 03:32 PM
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Elder Member
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 599
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
life rushes on by
and I stay still in my thoughts
so I am at peace
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10-31-2005, 11:23 PM
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Optimistic Realist
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Near Boston
Posts: 2,692
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
so I am at peace
famous last words, eh, body?
Now it's time to rest.
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11-01-2005, 12:09 AM
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in essence
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Oxfordshire uk
Posts: 870
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Now it's time to rest
Fall winds out blown as soft snow
Sun melts ice ego
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11-01-2005, 12:24 AM
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Optimistic Realist
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Near Boston
Posts: 2,692
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
Sun melts ice ego
That's what I thought I'd tell her
but instead, "uh, mint?"
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11-01-2005, 12:34 AM
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Elder Member
Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 599
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
but instead "uh, mint?"
in my tea I love it so
with one lump sugar
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11-01-2005, 12:45 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Gator Country, FL, USA
Posts: 5,709
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
with one lump sugar
conquering by submission
subtle, yet certain
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11-01-2005, 12:55 AM
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Optimistic Realist
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Near Boston
Posts: 2,692
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Re: The Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Chain
subtle, yet certain
I know that I'm always sure
raising my arms high
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