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09-06-2008, 04:54 PM
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
God lifts my heart to fly
stop the rhymes now I meanutt
you who make me cry
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09-06-2008, 05:04 PM
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IAN O. SETG
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
*snickering* lol
You who make me cry
Has stolen my heart away from me
Only God can heal me now
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09-06-2008, 05:30 PM
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
5-7-5 Ian.
God can heal me now
poke me with his big needle
and make me say ouch!
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09-06-2008, 06:55 PM
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IAN O. SETG
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
And make me say ouch!
First comes the pain of cleansing and growing
Then comes God's pure love
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09-06-2008, 07:01 PM
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
and make me say ouch!
drag through deep water hot fire
in life's deep crisis
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09-06-2008, 07:18 PM
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IAN O. SETG
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
In life's deep crisis
Praying for enlightenment
Ah ha……found a Bic lighter!
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09-07-2008, 04:47 PM
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Why do cows say MU?
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
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Originally Posted by Only Special To God
In life's deep crisis
Praying for enlightenment
Ah ha……found a Bic lighter!
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Ian needs some dance lessons, I see...
Quote:
Originally Posted by seattlegal
It started out as:
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Originally Posted by pseudonymous
Pseudo Haiku = the only structure rule is they must be 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables per line...topic can be anything of your choice.
The Chain= you must begin your pseudo-haiku using the last line of the poem before as the first line in your's.
I have seen these haiku chains get to 1000+ posts in other groups.
I begin with:
a haiku a day (5 syllables)
will keep the doctor away (7 syllables)
verbal supplement (5 syllables)
you begin with:
verbal supplement
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And grew, and grew, and grew to an amazing frame-stretching size after 732 replies, winding up as:
Today, it is reincarnated as: ebb and flow in love
dancing throughout the cosmos
resting here and there |
**tapping my zen stick**
OK, let's haiku:
- first line: five--syl-la-bles--long (notice that's 5 syllables)
- second line: sev-en--syl-la-bles--go--here (notice that's 7 syllables)
- third line: then--five--syl-la-bles (notice that's 5 syllables)
Alrighty then, Ian, have you got the rhythm? 
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11-07-2008, 08:45 AM
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#248 (permalink)
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Why do cows say MU?
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
...found a Bic lighter
cleared space, burned up the chaff
now we start anew
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11-07-2008, 10:51 AM
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
now we start anew,
everyday to try again
to make up our wrongs
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11-08-2008, 12:58 PM
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Rider on the storm...
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
to make up our wrongs
seems a bit like overkill
As they need no help
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11-08-2008, 01:01 PM
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
as they need no help
seems to you and me, but ask
and offer a hand
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11-08-2008, 01:04 PM
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Rider on the storm...
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
and offer a hand
but be wary of crocodiles
they cant help but bite
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11-08-2008, 01:11 PM
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
they cant help but bite
the echoing thunder jaws
top of the food chain
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11-13-2008, 10:11 PM
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
top of the food chain
growing bigger and badder
lucky ducky shark
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11-14-2008, 04:06 AM
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Reveres Sacred Pine Cone
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
Quote:
Originally Posted by seattlegal
- first line: five--syl-la-bles--long (notice that's 5 syllables)
- second line: sev-en--syl-la-bles--go--here (notice that's 7 syllables)
- third line: then--five--syl-la-bles (notice that's 5 syllables)
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 Genius!
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