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02-11-2008, 05:12 PM
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Why do cows say MU?
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The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
It started out as:
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Originally Posted by pseudonymous
Pseudo Haiku = the only structure rule is they must be 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables per line...topic can be anything of your choice.
The Chain= you must begin your pseudo-haiku using the last line of the poem before as the first line in your's.
I have seen these haiku chains get to 1000+ posts in other groups.
I begin with:
a haiku a day (5 syllables)
will keep the doctor away (7 syllables)
verbal supplement (5 syllables)
you begin with:
verbal supplement
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And grew, and grew, and grew to an amazing frame-stretching size after 732 replies, winding up as:
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Originally Posted by greymare
as you lived the lore
a hole in my heart is there
ebb and flow inlove
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Today, it is reincarnated as: ebb and flow in love
dancing throughout the cosmos
resting here and there
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02-11-2008, 05:48 PM
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Reveres Sacred Pine Cone
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
resting here and there
picking up cosmic sparkles
living jewelry
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02-11-2008, 06:01 PM
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Oannes
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
living jewelry
twinkling in the midnight sky
reminds us each day
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02-11-2008, 08:27 PM
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Executive Member
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
reminds us each day
because INLOVE is the way
to live life today
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02-13-2008, 09:56 PM
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General Member
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
to live life today
held in Love and Mercy find
love wisdom and truth
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02-13-2008, 11:41 PM
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Oannes
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
love wisdom and truth
call to spirits in the sky
invoke them humbly
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02-14-2008, 03:42 AM
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Reveres Sacred Pine Cone
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
invoke them humbly
rain rain rain shhhh earth so soaked
shhhh sheltering earth
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02-14-2008, 03:50 AM
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Executive Member
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
shhhh sheltering earth
Come, my lovely mosquito
arms await your kiss
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02-14-2008, 06:29 AM
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Junior Moderator, Intro
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
Arms await your kiss
Roses perfume quiet air
Chocolate on tongue
Phyllis Sidhe_Uaine
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02-14-2008, 11:31 PM
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Oannes
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
Chocolate on tongue
humid heat in Mexico
helps us bear winter
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02-15-2008, 04:46 PM
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Hermano Pequeño
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
Helps us bear winter
Till vernal splendor arrives
In all its glory.
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02-15-2008, 06:15 PM
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Reveres Sacred Pine Cone
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
in all its glory
days in the wink of a young
girl's eye glory days
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02-15-2008, 09:26 PM
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UNeyeR1
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
girls eye glory days
envisioning now's expanse
embracing future
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02-16-2008, 12:12 AM
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Oannes
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
embracing future
departing the rust bound past
we all exist right now
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02-19-2008, 08:30 PM
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here and now
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Re: The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread
we all exist now
brief wave across the ocean
water never dies
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