The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread

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  1. Dream

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    save the whales, japan
    -ese, is a language to please
    why are whales tasty?
     
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    why are whales tasty?
    stockpiling meat cos they can
    because we said NO
     
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    because we said NO
    thus your trouble was for naught?
    your sacrifice mocked?
     
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    your sacrifice mocked?
    the letter returned unread
    Lucy Ricardo
     
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    Lucy Ricardo:
    Lucy, I'm home; Rolling Stones:
    Brian Jones. Freebird.



    :confused: :rolleyes: :D
     
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    Brian Jones. Freebird.
    Freewilly! handstand over
    water. Birds in awe.
     
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    water, birds in awe.
    reflect freedom on the wing
    deep and high on breeze
     
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    deep and high on breeze
    or methamphetamines? Hey
    kids, rock and roll. Jazz.
     
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    kids, rock and roll. Jazz
    heavy metal, blues and punk
    what does it for you?
     
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    what does it do for you?
    what are little boys made of
    what are they made of
     
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    what are they made of
    banged up toes and dirty chins
    good clean mud, thats boys
     
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    what are they made of?
    marbles, books, glass, roots, sweetgrass,
    thatch and pitch, thick wits
     
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    ah!!

    cut off at the pass by the grey! OK!!

    *ahem*

    good clean mud, that's boys,
    broken toys, barney rubble,
    a big mud puddle
     
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    my bad pathbaby.lol


    a big mud puddle
    and a path of mud in house
    i was hungry, mum
     
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    i was hungry, mum
    that's the only reason why
    I drove it so fast
     
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    I drove it so fast
    no one saw the stop light
    or me blurring by
     
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    Middle pseudo-haiku lines in this thread so far listed by Author:

    AHANU
    quieting chaotic minds
    ask the wind, wave, bird, or clock,
    psychology of ancient
    Freewilly! handstand over

    CHINA_CAT_SUNFLOWER
    Come, my lovely mosquito
    dancing shadows, council drums

    DREAM
    visible secret language
    -ese, is a language to please
    thus your trouble was for naught?
    the letter returned unread
    what are little boys made of
    that's the only reason why

    FLOWPERSON
    twinkling in the midnight sky
    call to spirits in the sky
    humid heat in Mexico
    departing the rust bound past

    GATEKEEPER
    perfect truth and binding ties
    beat boldly with perfect love
    to humanity as whole
    how do you like dem apples
    psychedelic master of
    are the weeds of yesterday
    stand upon a moonlit shore

    GREYMARE
    because INLOVE is the way
    breathing on the moon and tide
    I feel your love sent to me
    i think ive had too much rum
    happening in the nation
    together in spirit, but
    sweethearts hold hands in the light
    in triplicate please madam
    stockpiling meat cos they can
    reflect freedom on the wing
    heavy metal, blues and punk
    banged up toes and dirty chins
    and a path of mud in house

    JACK_HALYARD
    Till vernal splendor arrives
    Neptune's children are singing

    JOEDJR
    held in Love and Mercy find

    NETTI-NETTI
    a time reborn for a transformed heart

    PATHLESS
    picking up cosmic sparkles
    rain rain rain shhhh earth so soaked
    days in the wink of a young
    volcanoes shuffle surface
    spider's threads, grandma spider
    gives up the competitive
    hunting into the dustbin
    muy bien buttery rum
    imagination mushrooms
    mad hatter eatin' cabbage
    my roots go deep and deeper
    when playing ping-pong maintain
    koo-koo kachoo and into
    and our creativity
    and tired old boredoms dripping
    salt tides water high swamping
    ask why. I drink Sam Adams
    Lucy, I'm home; Rolling Stones:
    or methamphetamines? Hey
    marbles, books, glass, roots, sweetgrass,
    broken toys, barney rubble,
    no one saw the stop light


    PHYLLIS_SIDHE_UAINE
    Roses perfume quiet air

    SEATTLEGAL
    dancing throughout the cosmos
    a sympathetic dance of
    liberty through love: truth frees
    spreading a blanket over

    SNOOPY
    brief wave across the ocean

    TAO_EQUUS
    in their metaphors and rhymes
     
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    or me blurring by
    think of what its like to fly
    time equals distance
     
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    Ha! :D :D Thanks for that, Dream.
     
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    time equals distance,
    distance runner, what's the time?
    It's time to get ill.
     

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