The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread

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  1. Ahanu

    Ahanu Well-Known Member

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    the sun rules the day
    the glare of reality
    do not fear the heat
     
  2. greymare

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    the sun rules the day
    and we rule our lives, and yet
    we keep searching for......
     
  3. Pathless

    Pathless Fiercely Interdependent

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    We keep searching for
    the hummus. We know it's here
    somewhere. Where is it?
     
  4. Jack Halyard

    Jack Halyard Hermano Pequeño

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    Let's go back to Ahanu shall we?

    Do not fear the heat.
    Bask in the sunshine, but don't
    Forget the sunscreen.
     
  5. wil

    wil UNeyeR1 Moderator

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    to complete the correction full circle....

    Forget the sunscreen
    you kidding? I feel the burn
    somewhere. Where is it?
     
  6. Dream

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    somewhere. Where is it?
    and we rule our lives, and yet
    somewhere. Where is it?
     
  7. Ahanu

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    Somewhere. Where is it?
    Like Siddhartha, I journey
    to my oasis. . .

    :D
     
  8. Dream

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    to my oasis. . .
    ship of the desert take me
    to my happy place
     
  9. Pathless

    Pathless Fiercely Interdependent

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    To my happy place,
    Robin! Batman takes the boy
    wonder underground.
     
  10. Ahanu

    Ahanu Well-Known Member

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    wonder underground
    Its the secret of secrets
    Behold the batcave!
     
  11. Pathless

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    Behold the batcave:
    igneous rocks twist, fold, grow
    old stalagmites rest
     
  12. greymare

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    old stalamites rest
    mites go up and tights go down
    old jungle saying:
     
  13. Jack Halyard

    Jack Halyard Hermano Pequeño

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    Old jungle saying:
    "The green mambas are in it
    Just for the money."
     
  14. Dream

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    Just for the money
    they said to bury my mind
    it was outrageous
     
  15. greymare

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    it was outrageous
    it was totally insane
    man walk on the moon?
     
  16. Dream

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    Mid-Haiku Part II

    AHANU
    As Mum would say, "don't worry,"
    the glare of reality
    Like Siddhartha, I journey
    Its the secret of secrets

    Alex_P
    In body, in mind and soul.....

    DREAM
    think of what its like to fly
    pink bird on a ladder rung
    professor Utonium
    keep a schedule get a job
    what lies beneath the dull crown
    fruit flies are changing the world
    interest or gravity
    a plethora of poets
    well done dig a deeper well
    the moon and stars rule the night
    and we rule our lives, and yet
    ship of the desert take me
    they said to bury my mind

    GREYMARE
    start off small and grow up tall
    old timers disease, i have
    inside, alive, yet alone
    stereotypical 'toons
    tell the girls its from someone
    yes sir no sir three bags full
    and a sprinkling of you two
    and happy to be here, yes
    gentle breeze, tide ebb and flow
    get up and move yourself, mate
    the kids are getting up now
    and we rule our lives, and yet
    mites go up and tights go down
    it was totally insane

    JACK_HALYARD
    Come in all sizes and shapes.
    Tom Joad and the Okies go.
    Just don't take too long my dear.
    Bask in the sunshine, but don't
    "The green mambas are in it

    NETTI-NETTI
    listening for the anthem, I know
    Safsters in the basement

    PATHLESS
    distance runner, what's the time?
    intentions we must pull the
    ing it once it has been got
    bottles and plastic angels
    Found it in a neglected
    not to the tick-tock rigid
    screw you sir no wage slave i
    Too much overstimulation
    movin' along, great moving
    interest on capital
    sketch quick lines, jot notes, rock boats,
    down caffeinated states of
    and the rivers are toxic.
    the hummus. We know it's here
    Robin! Batman takes the boy
    igneous rocks twist, fold, grow

    PHYLLIS_SIDHE_UAINE (kept Phyllis' old one, because they go together so well)
    Roses perfume quiet air
    Rending walls, building bridges

    Wil
    you kidding? I feel the burn
     
  17. Pathless

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    man walk on the moon
    much moonwalk my munching moo
    cow moon pies are yuck
     
  18. greymare

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    cow moon pies are yuck
    i like cows and i like pies
    i wish flow was here
     
  19. Dream

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    i wish flow was here
    with me at this wishing well
    its a kissing well
     
  20. Jack Halyard

    Jack Halyard Hermano Pequeño

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    It's a kissing well.
    It's said that Flow kisses well
    But I wouldn't know.
     

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