The Reincarnated Amazing Pseudo-Haiku Thread

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  1. IowaGuy

    IowaGuy Hunter-Gatherer

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    they will kill the snake
    ancient Aztec prophecy
    as Cortés smelled blood
     
  2. Dream

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    as Cortés smelled blood
    hating life and demoted
    with burning behind
     
  3. Ahanu

    Ahanu Well-Known Member

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    with burning behind
    dark black sooty grasshoppers
    ernest hemingway
     
  4. Dream

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    ernest hemingway
    could've been an engineer
    only a poet
     
  5. pseudonymous

    pseudonymous Obtuse Kineticist

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    only a poet
    words like precipitation
    find a home in art
     
  6. Dream

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    find a home in art
    activate the inner man
    reach out to people
     
  7. pseudonymous

    pseudonymous Obtuse Kineticist

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    reach out to people
    imagine pedestrians
    poked from their daydream
     
  8. seattlegal

    seattlegal Mercuræn Buddhist

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    poked from their daydream
    enchanted by mindfulness
    delight in each step
     
  9. radarmark

    radarmark Quaker-in-the-Making

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    delight in each step
    alone along pathless path
    steps and paths are one
     
  10. pseudonymous

    pseudonymous Obtuse Kineticist

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    steps and paths are one
    needing constant maintenance
    become lost in woods
     
  11. Dream

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    become lost in the woods
    a moment is a mouthful
    bears eating berries
     
  12. pseudonymous

    pseudonymous Obtuse Kineticist

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    bears eating berries
    do they now shit in the woods
    purple poop for proof
     
  13. Dream

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    purple poop for proof
    seriously that's screwed up
    I had no idea
     
  14. seattlegal

    seattlegal Mercuræn Buddhist

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    had no idea
    misstep due to purple poop
    it's not six six six
     
  15. seattlegal

    seattlegal Mercuræn Buddhist

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    it's not six six six
    that is the mark of these beasts
    it's the crap they spew
     
  16. Dream

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    it's the crap they spew
    they spin a web to catch us
    we shall overcome
     
  17. bob x

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    we shall overcome
    someday, and sing Kumbaya
    four-part harmony
     
  18. Dream

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    four-part harmony
    four participles of speech
    keeping time all ways
     
  19. pseudonymous

    pseudonymous Obtuse Kineticist

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    keeping time always
    the timex in the coffin
    punctual excess

    (thanks to dream & seattlegal...i was wondering who and how the purple poo would get resolved, and you both remind me why this thread can be so much fun...glad i brought the first one to the community)

    p.s. - in some parts of the US 'idea' is 2 syllables...;p
     
  20. Dream

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    punctual excess
    so on-time that you are late
    happens all the time

    ha ha. Redefines purple prose doesn't it?
     

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